hey Ritz, u must be on a roll..
with so many gone and just 4 to go..
u come out of shadows.. uve broken the rules..
uve done things which u never thought u wud..
that 1st time when u had it neat..
with li'l sprite, nothing else cud beat..
then u rode ur machine on a high
let both hands go.. and learnt to fly..
uve felt happy, uve felt the pain..
the day it just din cease to rain..
the day u knew it wasnt u..
and next time it was dejavu..
and that day in the movie hall..
when time just stopped..
u got the call..
hey Ritz, dont u see it all..
last 3 yrs.. uve had a ball!!
yes dude.. its been a ride..
Ive laughed a bit.. a bit i ve cried..
I ve also felt emptiness inside..
but above all..the "thing" i ve learnt
is to take things in my stride..
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lovely post dude!!
Brilliant.. i am sure Bon Jovi would be proud to make a song on that poem.. the poetry rocks mate!
Your verse is getting better :o)
@manpreet n insight...
thanx dudes..
@vini.. thanx for appreciating an amatuer..:-)
great blog address dude :))
Ab Poetry bhi ....subhaaan alllah !!! Its too much !!
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